Timestamp:

04/18/08 14:51:48 (19 months ago)

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http://ed.ruder.myopenid.com/ (IP: 10.100.10.112)

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Anatomy

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-= Anatomy of hi5 Application =
-hi5 platform allows your application to integrate with the site in a variety of ways. To fully leverage our platform, we have listed all the ways your application can deeply integrate within hi5 and fully utilize the user experience.
+= Anatomy of a hi5 Application =
+The hi5 platform allows your application to integrate with the site in a variety of ways. To fully leverage our platform, we have listed all the ways your application can deeply integrate within hi5 and fully utilize the user experience.
 
  1. [wiki:Anatomy/#Profilepage Profile page]
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 === Profile page ===
-This page represents the user's online identity on hi5. We have provided applications to integrate directly to the user's profile in a variety of ways. These integrations allow the user to further enhance their profiles and enable their friends to discover new applications on hi5.
+This page represents the user's online identity on hi5. We have enabled applications to integrate directly into the user's profile in a variety of ways. These integrations allow the user to further enhance their profiles and enable their friends to discover new applications on hi5.
 
 ==== Application Module ====
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 [[Image(wiki:Anatomy:Applications_Tab.jpg)]]
 
-The purpose of the Application tab is to showcase the user's friends activity with applications. This provides a great way for the user to discover the most relevant applications.
+The purpose of the Application tab is to showcase the user's friends' activity with applications. This provides a great way for the user to discover the most relevant applications.
 
- * Most recent applications that the user's friends have added
+ * The most recent applications that the user's friends have added
  * Applications that the user has installed
 
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 === Application Directory ===
-This allows the user to discover and browse new applications being built on the hi5 platform. The user can browse to the page directly from the Applications tab on the profile page. Each application on hi5 is assigned to a category to make it easy for users to discover based on their interests. Also, each listing in the directory allows the application to provide title, thumbnail and description.
+This allows the user to discover and browse new applications being built on the hi5 platform. The user can browse to the page directly from the Applications tab on the profile page. Each application on hi5 is assigned to a category to make it easy for users to discover based on their interests. Also, each listing in the directory allows the application to provide a title, thumbnail and description.
 
 [[Image(wiki:Anatomy:Applications_Directory.jpg)]]
 
 === Application Pages ===
-hi5 platform provides applications a variety of pages to inspire users to interact with the applications or to install them.
+The hi5 platform provides applications a variety of pages to inspire users to interact with the applications or to install them.
 
 ==== Canvas page ====
-The canvas page view of the application allows the developer to take advantage of the entire page. This is the opportunity for the developer to build a compelling experience for the user to interact with your application.
+The canvas page view of the application allows the developer to take advantage of the entire page. This provides an opportunity for the developer to build a compelling experience for the user to interact with the developer's application.
 
 [[Image(wiki:Anatomy:Application_Canvas.jpg)]]
 
 ==== Preview page ====
-This page allows the application to put its best foot forward to a hi5 user who hasn't yet installed the application. It lists the application rating, enagagment metrics and user's friends who have already installed the application.
+This page allows the application to put its best foot forward to a hi5 user who hasn't yet installed the application. It lists the application rating, enagagment metrics and the user's friends who have already installed the application.
 
-This page also allows hi5 members to discover more about the application. It includes name of the developer(s) who have created the application and user feedback.
+This page also allows hi5 members to discover more about the application. It includes the name(s) of the developer(s) who have created the application and user feedback.
 
 [[Image(wiki:Anatomy:Application_Preview.jpg)]]
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 === Messages ===
-Applications can send an email message to users if they have the application installed. The user who receives the appliction has to have approved notification via email. Their is a limit to the number of messages an app can send and the user has the option to unsubscribe.
+Applications can send an email message to users if they have the application installed. The user who receives the appliction has to have approved notification via email. There is a limit to the number of messages an app can send and the user has the option to unsubscribe.
 
 [[Image(wiki:Anatomy:Email_Message.gif)]]